A master in deception.
I falsely pleasure your senses.
Persuading you to believe power is in your control.
Unaware of my full capacity.
Give me an inch I'll take a mile.
Just one taste and I'll have you running back for more.
[In your mind I'm an elixir of life]
I hypnotize you under my spell, put you in a trance.
Playing with you like a puppet, my mind becomes your body.
I am in full control.
Yet I keep you coming back for more, addicted to the game.
Playing with no adventure.
I begin to write your story.
This has strong emotion. A few concrete and specific images might ground it more and give the reader a place to focus (perhaps one image extended over the piece) Did you mean trance instead of trans.?
ReplyDeleteLindy- this is fabulous. Really. I find it really intersting when people write from the perspective of the devil. Like that book The Screwtape Letters I was telling you about. I think you would really enjoy it. Love you girl and I love this. Really insitful. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the insight Mr. Dietrich..this is a work in progress haha, and yes I ment trance oops! Thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks Shan! Yes i've heard tons about that book..i really should read it, and now that we are on break i might be able to! Love you dearest